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03.03.07

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The Oak - 1° puntata

DAISY STORIES - The Oak
by Crystal Jones © 1995-2007

Chapter 1

Daisy was sitting at her office table trying to do her accounts. The office door was open as she was expecting the gas man to come.

Hearing footsteps, Daisy looked up and saw a big, wide man at the entrance. “Miss Hamilton please?” This oak of a man was clearly a foreigner. His clothes were worn badly as though their occupant had slept in them. His accent sounded harsh and unmusical.

“Yes, can I help you?” The oak slouched in, sat down opposite Daisy and looked at her from his half-opened eyes which studied her constantly. “I hear you are a very bright lady and that you can be trusted.”

He spoke these words as though they were at the same time a statement and a question. Daisy didn’t know how to reply and decided just to nod her head.

“I’ll tell you about my little problem. Here is your initial fee - I think a hundred pounds will do for the present. I work for the Russian Embassy and what I have to say must not get back there. My name is IIich Zubkov. You can check that by telephoning me at the embassy this evening, but only pretending to be an acquaintance, of course.”

“Can you please tell me your problem first. I can’t accept to help you without knowing what it entails,” Daisy was trying to take time as she felt rather overwhelmed by this man’s strong personality and physique.

The oak shut his eyes completely for a minute. He was used to giving orders and being obeyed without question. He decided to make an effort to appear more courteous to an English woman. “My wife has disappeared.”

The atmosphere was electric. “She went out shopping in the morning, two days ago, and hasn’t come back since. I have heard no news at all from her.”

Daisy got up ostensibly to make some instant coffee, but it was really to be able to study her client better.

(to be continued)

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Commento di: Maria Paola [Visitatore] Email · http://Maria Paola
Hello Mrs.Jones. For the first thank you for the English conversation that we have had yesterday. It's a very interesting and useful opportunity that you give us to practise our English. Thank you very much. This new Daisy's story seems to be interesting with the implication of a foreign Embassy. I'll follow the next chapters with curiosity. See you soon. Maria Paola RCE please

Correzione e risposta di Crystal Jones
Hello Mrs.Jones. First of all thank you for the English conversation we had yesterday. It's a very interesting and useful opportunity you are giving us to practise our English. Thank you very much. This new Daisy story seems interesting with the involvement of a foreign embassy. I am eager to read the following chapters. Hope to speak to you soon. Maria Paola RCE please

Dear Maria Paola,
It was nice getting to know you yesterday and I hope you will be able to talk to us soon. Let me know if you enjoy The Oak!
PermalinkPermalink 04.03.07 @ 16:12
Commento di: alberto [Visitatore] Email · http://Alberto
Hi Crystal, that of the disappearing of the oak's wife seems to have, already from the beginning, all the ingredients of the best daisy stories, i mean a beautiful atmosphere of contour, the human partecipation of Daisy and, obviously, a big splash of thriller.
As usual i'm curious to read the second part.
Thank you Crystal.
ciao Alberto RCE

Correzione di Crystal Jones

Hi Crystal,
The disappearance of The Oak's wife seems to have, already from the start, all the makings of one of the best Daisy Stories, I mean, there's a beautiful atmosphere, Daisy's humanity and, obviously, the typical thriller ingredients. As usual, I look forward to reading the second episode.
Thank you Crystal.
PermalinkPermalink 06.03.07 @ 10:22
Commento di: Debbie [Visitatore] Email
I was wondering if I could have a biography on Crystal Jones Im doing a paper on her and i cant find anything
PermalinkPermalink 08.05.07 @ 19:15

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